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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 11:58:09 GMT
Not bad Arny, keep trying - not sure about the cut in the T - as our man toffski says, it represents the apostrophe and doesn't really apply to the TOC graphic; got to get your ethos right as well as your creativity . Also remember to think cycling caps, at the very least I'd like a black cap with a logo on it from these guys who would perhaps do them to order if we asked nicely: www.etsy.com/shop/reddotscycling
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Post by Whitestar1 on May 31, 2013 12:05:41 GMT
A better effort this last one arny. I like it. Lets see what the others think.
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Post by Whitestar1 on May 31, 2013 12:07:47 GMT
Not bad Arny, keep trying - not sure about the cut in the T - as our man says, it represents the apostrophe and doesn't really apply to the TOR graphic; got to get your ethos right as well as your creativity . Also remeber to think cycling caps, at the very least I'd like a black cap with a logo on it from these guys who would perhaps do them to order if we asked nicely: www.etsy.com/shop/reddotscyclingVery good idea! Time enough we had a bit of sales going on here.
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 12:09:47 GMT
A better effort this last one arny. I like it. Lets see what the others think. Still needs development and other options to consider but miles better than the 'Juice' version !
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Post by Deleted on May 31, 2013 12:27:29 GMT
Numbers ?
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Post by zoltansocrates on May 31, 2013 12:36:47 GMT
i liked th idea behind the juice version but it doesnt read right, nice idea though
id prefer it as TOC - just the letters, old skool
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Post by Deleted on May 31, 2013 12:38:31 GMT
Okay, I've tried to finalise it with every aspect i can think of on the Triban 3: 1. Red bike - Red background. 2. Black Detailing - Black outline 3. White name - White Writing Just remember, It can be made smaller
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Post by zoltansocrates on May 31, 2013 12:46:49 GMT
i wouldnt have the letters joined
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Post by robertsims on May 31, 2013 12:52:36 GMT
Okay, I've tried to finalise it with every aspect i can think of on the Triban 3: 1. Red bike - Red background. 2. Black Detailing - Black outline 3. White name - White Writing Just remember, It can be made smaller Liking this one!
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 12:55:41 GMT
Wacky!?! Don't think it works but quite good fun?!? Conjures up thoughts of 'Red Triban Starting Point', 'Wheels', 'Ticking Clock Hands', 'Eyes', 'People's Faces' etc: The coloured letter could be red or blue and then covers all bases.
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 12:59:00 GMT
Okay, I've tried to finalise it with every aspect i can think of on the Triban 3: 1. Red bike - Red background. 2. Black Detailing - Black outline 3. White name - White Writing Just remember, It can be made smaller Liking this one! Nice, doesn't need the letters set inside, weakens the punch; also need to address the gaps between letters as they stand out as disproportionate to me - good though!!!
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 13:04:44 GMT
Also, as we're getting tuned in, to me the down-stroke of the T is thinner than the horizontal and might be the same width? Also appears to be slightly off horizontal or something is odd about the bottom level of the T when lined up with the C? Would the down-stroke of the T work on an angle to suggest movement? Think I agree with Zoltan, why link the letters?
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 13:24:19 GMT
Combo of BA's thoughts, the simple colour code lettering of mine and a Red Dot hat:
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Post by robertsims on May 31, 2013 14:27:57 GMT
Nice, doesn't need the letters set inside, weakens the punch; also need to address the gaps between letters as they stand out as disproportionate to me - good though!!! That's the problem with these type of things, everyone likes something different - I personally really like the words inside.
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Post by Radchenister on May 31, 2013 14:51:51 GMT
All opinions are fine, it's not really a straight case of liking it or not though, from experience I can pretty much guarantee it won't work at various scales and in different formats, a logo needs to work at lots of different levels.
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